Rain, sun, flowers, baterflies and bees

15 May

Days In The Blackberries Field

in vain, little bee!
gazania closes petals
the sun goes down


what’s the hurry, butterfly?
fields are flooded
no sun to dry them


confused insects
freshet breaks budding branches
rain has no mercy


ruzaFor Carpe Diem Special #92, Jack Kerouac’s 3rd “two big bumblebees”


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9 responses to “Rain, sun, flowers, baterflies and bees

  1. Gunn's Cabin Fever

    15/05/2014 at 6:18 pm

    Very nice ones

  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    15/05/2014 at 8:15 pm

    The haiga is sweet and very nice..

  3. Chèvrefeuille

    15/05/2014 at 8:26 pm

    What a nice series of haiku Sky, but your haiga is really gorgeous.

    • Sky Vani

      15/05/2014 at 8:31 pm

      Thanks, I thought it would go nice with the prompt.

  4. a walk in haiku

    16/05/2014 at 5:26 am

    Nice take on the prompt, Sky! I agree, the haiga is super.

  5. magicalmysticalteacher

    16/05/2014 at 4:50 pm

    Like the butterfly after the fields are flooded, I often hurry needlessly. Maybe one day the butterfly and I will both learn…

    Bribing Bumblebees


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