Evening Sky

stars wait in line
to get bath in the city lights
Aurora is shy

In response to Carpe Diem’s Special #70, Alexey Andreyev’s “Evening sky”

evening sky —
over the city lights
stars hardly seen

(c) Alexey Andreyev

b2ap3_thumbnail_Aurora-polare-Parmitano

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21 thoughts on “Evening Sky

    1. Did you want to say that I missed the prompt involving imagination over the limit? That’s just the way I saw the image. I am not an expert for haiku, so making mistakes doesn’t surprise me. Those who try, make mistakes. Thank you for reading. I appreciate your comment.

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      1. Yes, you are right. It is much better, I will correct it. Thank you very much for your feedback, I must admit that I was nervous a little, thinking that it’s maybe too abstract for haiku. I haven’t even noticed “h” 🙂

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  1. You’re doing fine. There is no mistake. In poetry/haiku, there is no right or wrong. It’s our own personal interpretation. Just continue writing. We all get better with practice! 😉

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