Tan Renga Challenge #25

In response to Tan Renga Challenge #25, Angie’s “fair-colored windows”

The goal is to write a second stanza of two-lines (following 7_7 syllables) towards the given haiku written by Angie:

fair-colored windows -
the barren break forth in song
better than words

Here is my try:

fair-colored windows –
the barren break forth in song
better than words (Angie)

that is why I am speechless
while she is looking at me 

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