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Tan Renga Challenge #25

03 Jan

In response to Tan Renga Challenge #25, Angie’s “fair-colored windows”

The goal is to write a second stanza of two-lines (following 7_7 syllables) towards the given haiku written by Angie:

fair-colored windows -
the barren break forth in song
better than words

Here is my try:

fair-colored windows –
the barren break forth in song
better than words (Angie)

that is why I am speechless
while she is looking at me 

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8 responses to “Tan Renga Challenge #25

  1. Bryan Ens

    03/01/2014 at 4:52 pm

    sometimes singing…and sometimes silence is better than words.

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  2. angieinspired

    03/01/2014 at 5:13 pm

    Speechless. Brilliant.

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    03/01/2014 at 9:56 pm

    The silence can say more than words

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  4. Chèvrefeuille

    04/01/2014 at 12:37 am

    Nice continuation Sky … makes me speechless too.

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    • Sky Vani

      04/01/2014 at 11:15 am

      Thank you. Somehow, “the barren break forth in song” inspired me the most.

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