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03 Jan

dried leaves in a basket
on a meadow by a tree
~ youth and an old age

basket of grass

In response to Carpe Diem’s Revise That Haiku #4, Shiki’s ”a basket of grass”

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23 responses to “Circular

  1. Oloriel

    03/01/2014 at 7:01 pm

    Beautiful comparison! 😀

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  2. Morgan

    03/01/2014 at 7:17 pm

    Beautifully Written 🙂

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  3. moondustwriter

    03/01/2014 at 8:28 pm

    a complete circle – well done

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    • Sky Vani

      03/01/2014 at 9:02 pm

      I am happy if I described it. Thank you very much

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  4. Ye Pirate

    03/01/2014 at 8:48 pm

    Very nicely done

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    03/01/2014 at 10:00 pm

    Perfect circle.. love it

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    • Sky Vani

      03/01/2014 at 10:13 pm

      Thank you very much and thanks for all comments.

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  6. kaykuala

    04/01/2014 at 12:17 am

    Exact picture to illustrate progress of change! Nicely Sky Vani!

    Hank

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  7. Chèvrefeuille

    04/01/2014 at 12:58 am

    You did a great job with this revision … I like the idea a life’s circle in your haiku.

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    • Sky Vani

      04/01/2014 at 11:17 am

      I also saw workers in a field resting and children playing, but that couldn’t be seen for real. Thank you.

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  8. anmol(alias HA)

    04/01/2014 at 1:58 am

    Oh! That made me smile. Great job in revising the one by Shiki.
    -HA

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  9. A walk in haiku

    04/01/2014 at 4:11 am

    There’s wisdom in those words!

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    • Sky Vani

      04/01/2014 at 11:20 am

      There are a lot of things that we can learn from our grandparents, I agree.

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  10. Cathy Tenzo

    04/01/2014 at 5:20 am

    Well done you!

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  11. angieinspired

    04/01/2014 at 6:08 pm

    I liked yours just as much as the original.

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  12. baldy

    14/01/2014 at 12:25 pm

    excellent 🙂

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