04 Jan

handshake and whistle ~
a hidden tear in her eye
reveals fear and hope

In response to Carpe Diem #365, Yaroslavl


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15 responses to “Separation

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    04/01/2014 at 7:56 am

    Separations on train stations.. I get a feeling from an old black and white movie


    • Sky Vani

      04/01/2014 at 11:22 am

      Immodestly, but this means that I did what I wanted. That’s the picture that I was holding in my head while I was writing. Thank you.


      • Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

        04/01/2014 at 11:27 am

        Frankly I saw Casablanca…


      • Sky Vani

        04/01/2014 at 12:01 pm

        Thank you once again. I didn’t think of any one particular movie, I just created an image.


  2. magicalmysticalteacher

    04/01/2014 at 12:45 pm

    Why is it that hope and fear are so often closely intertwined?

    Travelers’ Dreams


    • Sky Vani

      04/01/2014 at 6:09 pm

      “Bitter sweet symphony”… Thanks for stopping by and reading.


  3. Chèvrefeuille

    04/01/2014 at 3:30 pm

    Strong emotions you share here Sky … emotions that strong caught in a haiku wonderful.


  4. poetrypea

    04/01/2014 at 5:49 pm

    She’s taking a big step. Lovely writing.


  5. Mark M. Redfearn

    04/01/2014 at 6:25 pm

    A mere handshake? Sounds like an ending…

    Sustenance for the Journey


    • Sky Vani

      04/01/2014 at 6:30 pm

      But maybe it was just a timid start. We will see… 🙂


  6. baldy

    14/01/2014 at 12:29 pm

    nicely done, best wishes from baldy



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