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Up and Down

08 Jan

Days In The Blackberries Fields 

up, down, upside down
we scream but yet don’t fall out
~ a roller coaster

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8 responses to “Up and Down

  1. Open Heart

    08/01/2014 at 3:13 pm

    Hi friend great :
    )

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    • Sky Vani

      08/01/2014 at 3:14 pm

      Hey! 🙂 Long time…

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      • Open Heart

        08/01/2014 at 3:16 pm

        hmm yea..lot of work

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      • Sky Vani

        08/01/2014 at 3:18 pm

        I am glad that you are came back. I hope that all is well with you.

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  2. Ye Pirate

    11/01/2014 at 12:16 am

    How long did you say you have been writing haiku? You researched a lot also I think…the style of this is someone who really understands haiku.. All you have missing is a kimono and green tea!

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    • Sky Vani

      11/01/2014 at 2:09 am

      Thank you. I started this blog in March or April. That’s when I started to write again. I had some short thoughts – they are my favorite, but in free verse. At the beginning of the summer I tried to write them in short-long-short thinking that it is haiku in English. Few months later I started putting them in 575 and called them haiku. Well, last month I learnt a lot. But still I write by feeling and it is hard to memorize all those terms and names. 🙂 When I finish, I am never sure what is written – haiku or senryu. But yes… I think that I understand the basis.

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      • Ye Pirate

        11/01/2014 at 2:14 am

        By ‘understand’ I mean truly, deeply understand. There are not many that do, in my experience. You do. PS, as Basho said,’learn the rules then break them!’ Thank you for your reply. Interesting.

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      • Sky Vani

        11/01/2014 at 2:18 am

        Thanks, I much appreciate your comments. It means a lot to me to know that I’m on the right track.

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