RSS

Entry

09 Jan

 

God-epiphany

your unspoken words ~
silence that you choose to wear
whenever we met
*
whenever we met ~
tornado turns my insides
fear becomes stronger
*
fear becomes stronger ~
knowing things that you don’t know
I wait for the fate
*
I wait for the fate
the fate waits for a moment
~ moment waits for sign
*
moment waits for sign
signs may be hidden in dreams
~ I write down my dreams
*
I write down my dreams
opening gates of the sky
~ You may enter now!

In response to Carpe Diem #370, Tyumen, although every stanza is Senryu more than Haiku, I think.

 

Advertisements
 

Tags: , , , , , , , , ,

8 responses to “Entry

  1. Noora

    09/01/2014 at 8:43 pm

    Exquisite work, Sky!! I wish I could like this post twice. So perfectly composed piece.

    Like

     
    • Sky Vani

      09/01/2014 at 11:12 pm

      Blame on picture, Noora! 🙂 Thank you very much.

      Like

       
  2. Chèvrefeuille

    09/01/2014 at 10:57 pm

    Wonderful haiku suite Sky … and it flows like a river … well done 🙂

    Like

     
  3. Anja

    10/01/2014 at 12:09 am

    Very beautiful!

    Like

     
  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    13/01/2014 at 7:26 pm

    Lovely

    Like

     

Feel free to share your thoughts with me ;)

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

 
%d bloggers like this: