In The Park

one heart and two names
etched into the wooden seat
fight against the time

empty swing

Empty Swing

In response to Carpe Diem Special #71, Alexey Andreyev’s second haiku “Empty Swing”

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16 thoughts on “In The Park

  1. Sky this haiku is simply….unbeatable…I am truly numbed. I am not sure if it is best to lose ‘the’ in the 3rd line, but or me the overall haiku is a whole book in itself. Amazing. Truly.

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    1. I don’t know about “the”, I was thinking about that also. To be honest my the biggest problem is – “the”, “a” and when to use it or not to use it. Especially with plural. I know the grammar rule, but I am still never sure. And thank you, you are too kind 🙂

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