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Q&A

11 Jan

QUESTION
(reverse nonet)

riots
even
when we think
that everything
is in its right place
an imperishable
everlasting disturbance
even when we have everything
Is that a wandering of a soul?

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ANSWER
(haiku)

years engrave wrinkles
reminding on all byways
~ hearts remain the same

In response to Carpe Diem #371, Irtysh River

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10 responses to “Q&A

  1. A walk in haiku

    11/01/2014 at 5:48 am

    I’ve never tried a nonet. Very interesting, Sky! I like “hearts remain the same” … I think that is a blessing in life.

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    • Sky Vani

      11/01/2014 at 9:34 am

      Thank you very much and yes, I agree with you.

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  2. poetrypea

    11/01/2014 at 8:22 am

    What a super write. I really connected with the Haiku in particular.

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    • Sky Vani

      11/01/2014 at 9:36 am

      Thank you. Seems that lately it’s the only way I could write. 🙂

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  3. Mike

    11/01/2014 at 11:11 am

    This difficult and complex structure evolves into an elegant blend of poetic styles. Very well done.

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  4. Chèvrefeuille

    12/01/2014 at 1:04 am

    Awesome post Sky …what a joy to read this poem and the answer in haiku … well done.

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