In response to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge #26, Nicole’s “summer evening”
The goal is to write a second stanza of two-lines (following 7_7 syllables) towards the given haiku written by Nicole the Local Artist of Setting fire to the landscape:
summer evening a breeze turns leaves over abandoned book
Here is my try:
summer evening
a breeze turns leaves over
abandoned book
by the window an old man
asleep on a rocking chair
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magicalmysticalteacher
11/01/2014 at 3:25 pm
If I didn’t have a book available, I think I’d fall asleep too. Oh, wait! I fall asleep while reading! 😉
My Tan Renga Completion
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Sky Vani
11/01/2014 at 3:33 pm
hmm… i think so 🙂
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Chèvrefeuille
12/01/2014 at 12:35 pm
beautiful completion of the Tan Renga Sky … a very nice scenery you have shared here.
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Sky Vani
12/01/2014 at 1:57 pm
Thank you
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Chèvrefeuille
13/01/2014 at 12:09 am
You’re welcome
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readinpleasure
13/01/2014 at 6:53 pm
So imaginative!
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Sky Vani
13/01/2014 at 8:36 pm
Thank you 🙂
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
13/01/2014 at 9:47 pm
This is a great completion.. really paint a complete picture of the summer evening.
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Sky Vani
16/01/2014 at 2:39 pm
Thank you, Björn.
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atrm61
16/01/2014 at 2:31 pm
Absolutely wonderful!
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Sky Vani
16/01/2014 at 2:40 pm
Thank you very much, atrm61.
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atrm61
16/01/2014 at 2:42 pm
:-)A pleasure Sky Vani
Atreyee
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