Tan Renga Challenge #27

In response to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge #27, “I catch the sunrise”

The goal is to write a second stanza of two-lines (following 7_7 syllables) towards the given haiku written by Ese of Ese’s Voice ( I love her blog, btw): 

great expectations
entangled in fishing line
I catch the sunrise
(by Ese)

Here is my try:

great expectations
entangled in fishing line
I catch the sunrise

by bucket my old dog sleeps
already tired of waiting

dobber

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