Love L4

20 Jan

red petals around
lazy morning day after
pillow smells as love

In response to Carpe Diem Special #73, Alexey Andreyev’s fourth, “day after Valentine’s”


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14 responses to “Love L4

  1. Bryan Ens

    21/01/2014 at 4:09 am

    Glad to see another positive spin


    • Sky Vani

      22/01/2014 at 10:42 pm

      Seems that only two of us saw it that way 🙂 Thank you.


  2. magicalmysticalteacher

    21/01/2014 at 10:30 am

    Red petals. Roses? Chrysanthemums? Something else? 😉

    Valentine’s #1 and Valentine’s #2


  3. Noora

    21/01/2014 at 10:40 am

    Loved this. So beautiful.


  4. Chèvrefeuille

    21/01/2014 at 1:21 pm

    A beauty … this is the opposite of my interpretation of the haiku by Alexey. You have read it as a positive experience … well done … your haiku really is a beauty Sky.


    • Sky Vani

      22/01/2014 at 10:47 pm

      Thank you, Chèvrefeuille. I guess that an interpretation depends on our mood while we are reading.


      • Chèvrefeuille

        23/01/2014 at 12:31 am

        Our mood can inspire us … and there is nothing wrong with.


      • Sky Vani

        23/01/2014 at 12:39 am

        Of course, not. That’s the beauty of all.


  5. WabiSabi

    21/01/2014 at 7:23 pm

    I like your take on ‘the morning after.’ 🙂


  6. readinpleasure

    22/01/2014 at 3:43 pm

    A wonderful love!



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