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Traveler #2

02 Feb

Days In The Blackberries Field

a hat, cape and gourd
protection from evil deeds
evil thoughts and words

the road is too long
legs are tired of wandering
~ faith pulls me further

I am lost alone
not knowing where should I go
~ can you be my guide?

Inspired by Carpe Diem Special #75, Pilgrimage to Santiago De Compostela or The Way of St. James

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7 responses to “Traveler #2

  1. VILLAGE BOOKS (@yeVILLAGEBOOKS)

    02/02/2014 at 5:59 pm

    I can feel the edge in those haiku. The imploring.

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    • Sky Vani

      02/02/2014 at 7:07 pm

      Thank you very much for the visit and the feedback.

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  2. Chèvrefeuille

    02/02/2014 at 9:01 pm

    Awesome trio Sky … what a nice short story caught in a trio of haiku. Well … done …

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  3. Sun

    02/02/2014 at 10:15 pm

    yes, your haiku creates an amazing scenario. nicely done, Sky.

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    • Sky Vani

      02/02/2014 at 10:57 pm

      Thank you, Sun! I’m so glad you liked it.

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