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Traveler #3

03 Feb

Days In The Blackberries Field

guarded for too long
for those who can not see it
an internal light
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a bird in a cage
even if it is roomy
never learns to fly
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a long distance calls
traveling trough the inside
the skin is too tight
***
shoes are nailed to floor
but fingers untie laces
and attach the wings
***
the sky is inside
a million stars every night
illuminate path

Inspired by Carpe Diem #390, Konsenji (Temple 3)

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11 responses to “Traveler #3

  1. Maggie Grace

    03/02/2014 at 1:37 am

    Shoes untied is my favorite. Gives me the chills in a good way.

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    • Sky Vani

      03/02/2014 at 2:31 pm

      🙂 Thanks for reading and commenting. I also liked it the most while I was writing.

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  2. Bryan Ens

    03/02/2014 at 5:02 am

    I agree with Maggie…untying nailed down shoes and attaching wings is a great way to escape

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    • Sky Vani

      03/02/2014 at 2:32 pm

      As expected, I also agree with two of you. 🙂 Thanks for reading.

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  3. Chèvrefeuille

    03/02/2014 at 12:12 pm

    Your last haiku is a masterpiece Sky … chapeau!

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  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    03/02/2014 at 8:35 pm

    Wonderful series.. love them all.. the caged bird spoke to me.

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    • Sky Vani

      04/02/2014 at 2:35 pm

      Thank you, Björn. I’m glad the bird is not neglected.

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  5. Sun

    04/02/2014 at 6:02 am

    clever haiku series with the last one being my favorite. beautiful stars.

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    • Sky Vani

      04/02/2014 at 2:37 pm

      I’m glad you found something to yourself. We are all different, but yet so similar. Thank you.

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