Sunday Tanka

09 Feb

Days In The Blackberries Field

The magic is gone
and gems are pebbles again.
I still sit noodling.
Among a million pebbles
searching for right seventeen.


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4 responses to “Sunday Tanka

  1. Chagall

    09/02/2014 at 3:34 pm

    Haiku writer’s block? —Chagall


  2. whocouldknowthen

    09/02/2014 at 4:28 pm

    the pebbles will turn to gems again Sky,
    it’s the cyclical nature of creativity and inspiration.
    besides, pebbles have their own beauty!.


    • Sky Vani

      09/02/2014 at 4:39 pm

      I know that you’re right and thank you. I’ve just noticed two “pebbles” in 21 words! :))



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