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Doors (LOCKED)

16 Feb

Days In The Blackberries Field

in hushed tones
gentle melody slides out
through the keyhole

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2 responses to “Doors (LOCKED)

  1. Chagall

    16/02/2014 at 8:43 pm

    Well done. Did you intend “through” in line 3? —Chagall

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    • Sky Vani

      17/02/2014 at 12:45 pm

      Oh, yes! Thank you so much. I was wondering for hours why did you ask that. I haven’t noticed the typo… I will correct it. Thanks again.

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