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03 Mar

Days In The Blackberries Field

warmest day ends up ~
sun hides behind mountain
leaving the sky dark
*
worms buried within
wake up digging everywhere
~  the madness begins 
*
roses spread their thorns
turning butterflies in moths
~ nightingales become ravens
*
angels and devils
meeting on a battle ground
~ crossing wings and swords 
*
new morning arrives 
air mixed with a smell of rain
~ hot coffee lures

 

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3 responses to “Switch

  1. Hamish Gunn VILLAGE BOOKS

    03/03/2014 at 6:12 pm

    There is tension in these haiku – in the middle few, that can a hard edge. Very interesting, and rescued by the last morning haiku. Angels and devils certainly speak of a battle within!

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