08 Mar

Days In The Blackberries Field

gull flies to the line
where the sky merges with sea
searching for a taste

Inspired by Carpe Diem #416, Jodo-ji (temple 49)


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7 responses to “Freedom

  1. Chèvrefeuille

    08/03/2014 at 10:52 am

    Very beautiful Sky … a haiku which could have been written by one of our classical haiku-poets.


    • Sky Vani

      09/03/2014 at 12:34 am

      This is big compliment, thank you. And thanks for the all other comments that I didn’t answer because I wasn’t much on WP lately.


  2. Hamish Gunn Fly Indie

    08/03/2014 at 11:25 am

    I agree with Chevrefeuille. Very true.


    • Sky Vani

      09/03/2014 at 12:36 am

      Thank you very much for the continuous support. It’s a treasure having you as a friend.


  3. Mike

    09/03/2014 at 1:46 am

    Both poet and bird have good taste.


  4. whocouldknowthen

    09/03/2014 at 11:07 am

    very evocative Sky, a prefect Haiku!



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