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Before The Spring

15 Mar

Days In The Blackberries Field

on celestial stage
during the main performance
insecure fingers
opening curtain of clouds
~ bashful smile of the March sun

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10 responses to “Before The Spring

  1. angieinspired

    15/03/2014 at 2:13 pm

    I really like this on many levels

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  2. whocouldknowthen

    16/03/2014 at 6:09 am

    insecure fingers
    opening curtain of clouds
    ~ bashful smile of the March sun

    this is sublime poetry Sky, loved this Tanka!

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    • Sky Vani

      16/03/2014 at 8:22 am

      Thank you, very much. How are you?

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      • whocouldknowthen

        16/03/2014 at 4:22 pm

        oh busy with Cbear’s b’day celebration, and a little worn out so i’m not posting something new today as i usually do on Sunday’s…and you? new gravatar i see? lol

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      • Sky Vani

        16/03/2014 at 9:35 pm

        That is a good reason for no-posting! My best wishes go to Cbear.
        New gravatar… Well, yes… I am looking for a suitable. 🙂 Btw, I just found out that my blog celebrated it’s 1st bday yesterday and I missed it somehow. Now, I’m thinking of changing the name, not only gravatar. 🙂

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      • whocouldknowthen

        17/03/2014 at 1:45 pm

        yeah i guess i did too, i was thinking of doing an 1 year poetry post in April…maybe?…maybe not..lol

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  3. Mike

    16/03/2014 at 7:15 am

    Strip-tease. Lovely composition and concept.

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    • Sky Vani

      16/03/2014 at 8:31 am

      Not exactly what I had on my mind, but of course, can be read in that way. Thanks.

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