About The Rain

11 Apr

Days In The Blackberries Field

time of severe drought
thirsty ground longing for rain
each drop is priceless
roses without thorns
raindrops wet down the petals
bouquet in his hand
after the downpour
raindrops slide down the window
leaving the traces
useless umbrella
hanging on its broken wire
looks miserable
raindrops on her cheeks
skillfully disguise the tears
no one noticing
happy gutters sing
making the right atmosphere
new haiku revives
today’s rain enters
through the skin into the bones
~ a deadly coldness



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9 responses to “About The Rain

  1. readinpleasure

    11/04/2014 at 5:18 pm

    Ow, these are wonderful 🙂


  2. artmusedog and carol

    11/04/2014 at 5:23 pm

    Wonderful series of haiku for ‘raindrops’ ~ all very exciting ~ Happy Weekend to you ~ xoxo

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)


    • Sky Vani

      12/04/2014 at 6:40 pm

      Happy weekend to you, too. Thanks for visiting.


  3. magicalmysticalteacher

    12/04/2014 at 10:50 am

    Oh, yes, raindrops and indistinguishable from tears!

    No Pattering of Raindrops


  4. magicalmysticalteacher

    12/04/2014 at 10:50 am

    “are” (not “and”)


  5. MichelleMarie

    13/04/2014 at 2:31 am

    I love this! I totally love your themes! 🙂



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