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Melted

16 Apr

Days In The Blackberries Field 

April sun above
the white mountain peaks afar
a scent of hyacinths

For Carpe Diem’s “Revise that haiku” #5, Shiki’s “The snow has melted”

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8 responses to “Melted

  1. readinpleasure

    16/04/2014 at 5:16 pm

    Lovely!

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  2. Chèvrefeuille

    16/04/2014 at 11:12 pm

    Wow Sky what a nicely done revision.

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  3. Bastet

    17/04/2014 at 1:33 pm

    Lovely, you’ve captured the spirit of Shiki!

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