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Fasting

18 Apr

Days In The Blackberries Field 

Friday tasting sweet
slice of bread smeared with honey
on the hungry lips

For Carpe Diem #451, fasting

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5 responses to “Fasting

  1. Chèvrefeuille

    18/04/2014 at 11:31 pm

    Awesome haiku Sky

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    • Sky Vani

      18/04/2014 at 11:47 pm

      Thanks. I was inspired this morning which is not always the case 🙂

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      • Chèvrefeuille

        18/04/2014 at 11:49 pm

        Well … you did great Sky

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      • Sky Vani

        19/04/2014 at 12:05 am

        I know I did the good thing only if I still like it after some time. At the beginning they all seem pretty similar to me. So, thank you, it is good to know. 🙂

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      • Chèvrefeuille

        19/04/2014 at 6:17 pm

        Sometimes a first edition of a haiku can be the best, but … also the classic haiku-poets did revise their first edition … so …

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