21 Apr

Days In The Blackberries Field

reaching for the sun
free wings sparkle in the sky
birds and words in spring

reaching for the sun
promises of better times
shine on tomorrows

~ The second one is the very first Senryu written by my friend, who wasn’t even aware what was made.
Very good and uplifting for me so I had to post it. ~

For Carpe Diem’s ”Only the First Line” #6, ”reaching for the sun”’


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3 responses to “Promising

  1. Oloriel

    21/04/2014 at 2:05 pm

    I agree, very uplifting! 🙂


  2. Chèvrefeuille

    21/04/2014 at 4:45 pm

    Beautifully composed haiku Sky and that senryu by your friend is a nice one … he has talent …



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