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Promising

21 Apr

Days In The Blackberries Field

reaching for the sun
free wings sparkle in the sky
birds and words in spring

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reaching for the sun
promises of better times
shine on tomorrows

~ The second one is the very first Senryu written by my friend, who wasn’t even aware what was made.
Very good and uplifting for me so I had to post it. ~

For Carpe Diem’s ”Only the First Line” #6, ”reaching for the sun”’

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3 responses to “Promising

  1. Oloriel

    21/04/2014 at 2:05 pm

    I agree, very uplifting! 🙂

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  2. Chèvrefeuille

    21/04/2014 at 4:45 pm

    Beautifully composed haiku Sky and that senryu by your friend is a nice one … he has talent …

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