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Midday Nap

22 Apr

Days In The Blackberries Field

a semi-sleep
in the cradle next to bed
baby wakes up

*

unsuccessfully
hand adheres heavy head
half asleep

*

awakened
from the afternoon nap
she takes a glass

*

in a hotel room
pillow saves the secret
after midday nap

*

afternoon nap
every two seconds
new message arrives

*

drizzly rain 
dream about you
overtakes me

For Carpe Diem #454, midday nap

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11 responses to “Midday Nap

  1. awordofsubstance

    22/04/2014 at 1:49 pm

    I love the way this is broken up. Nicely written.
    http://www.awordofsubstance.wordpress.com

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  2. readinpleasure

    22/04/2014 at 6:09 pm

    These are wonderfully done!

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    • Sky Vani

      22/04/2014 at 8:03 pm

      Thank you very much, I liked yours, very intriguing. 🙂

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  3. Chèvrefeuille

    22/04/2014 at 10:44 pm

    Wonderful series Sky, you were on a roll with this prompt.

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    • Sky Vani

      23/04/2014 at 12:00 pm

      I did something different for this prompt – didn’t count for the first time… Thank you.

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  4. Mark M. Redfearn

    23/04/2014 at 12:01 am

    Turn the phone off while you’re napping!

    A Nap Disturbed

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  5. mystickuheli

    23/04/2014 at 2:34 am

    Your that “hotel room” is too great 🙂 (Y)

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    • Sky Vani

      23/04/2014 at 8:28 pm

      Thank you 😀

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      • Sky Vani

        23/04/2014 at 8:29 pm

        : and D make really ugly smile here, on WP 🙂

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