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Still… (Tan Renga Squared)

25 Apr

Days In The Blackberries Field 

so many temples
all breaths become one
the steps flow (Cathy)

nobody knows where I go
following signs by the road

trying to catch sun
since time immemorial
till eternity

nights offer the distant stars
temples of the universe

For Carpe Diem Tan Renga Squared #1, Cathy Tenzo’s ”the steps flow”

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6 responses to “Still… (Tan Renga Squared)

  1. readinpleasure

    25/04/2014 at 3:32 pm

    Wonderful!

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  2. Chèvrefeuille

    25/04/2014 at 6:19 pm

    What a joy to read this TR-Squared Sky … it’s not an easy challenge but you did a great job.

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  3. Cathy Tenzo

    25/04/2014 at 8:55 pm

    Lovely! I love what you did with the haiku I wrote.

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    • Sky Vani

      27/04/2014 at 4:19 pm

      Thank you very much, your opinion means a lot. It was wonderful haiku.

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  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    26/04/2014 at 3:44 pm

    Oh the stars are indeed the ultimate temples

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