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Fireflies

03 May

Days In The Blackberries Field

beneath the old tree
celebrating the first kiss
fireflies make firework

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turning on and off
green fireflies on my window
make a real light show

For Carpe Diem Special #90, Jack Kerouac’s “glow worm”

 

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6 responses to “Fireflies

  1. The Manoj Arora

    03/05/2014 at 1:07 pm

    Nice…

    homesick fish-
    I put some salt
    in her bowl

    check out more of my works when you can.

    -The Manoj Arora. http://themanojarorablog.wordpress.com/

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    • Sky Vani

      03/05/2014 at 5:10 pm

      Great one, thank you! 🙂 And thanks for the visit. I will check it up, thanks.

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  2. Risa

    03/05/2014 at 5:49 pm

    The second haiku is quite vivid. Very nice!

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  3. readinpleasure

    03/05/2014 at 6:12 pm

    How nice! The first one ‘crackles!’ 🙂

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  4. Chèvrefeuille

    03/05/2014 at 7:22 pm

    Two wonderfully composed haiku Sky, your first haiku is really romantic and that 2nd is stunning. Well done …

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    03/05/2014 at 7:34 pm

    Fireflies are amazing — and so are your poems.

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