22 May

looking at the watch
he behaves indifferent~
audible heart beats

For Carpe Diem Special #93, Jack Kerouac’s 4th “playing basketball”


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4 responses to “Tick-tock

  1. Blog It Or Lose It

    22/05/2014 at 1:46 am

    …. only SEEMS indifferent! Love the feel of this poem. 🙂


  2. Ayushee Ghoshal

    22/05/2014 at 4:06 am

    And that feeling of love 🙂
    Loved this one.


  3. Chèvrefeuille

    22/05/2014 at 10:09 am

    Very strong feelings in this haiku Sky … great response on Kerouac”s one.


  4. Mark M. Redfearn

    22/05/2014 at 4:44 pm

    I don’t know too many people who are indifferent to clocks…

    Whiffs of Kerouac



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