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12 Jun

Days In The Blackberries Field

passing through the blinds
the first rays of tomorrow
~ summer lullaby

For Carpe Diem #490, Dawn

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13 responses to “Down

  1. Chèvrefeuille

    12/06/2014 at 11:41 pm

    Very nice sphere you have created with your haiku Sky … I can feel those first sunrays on my naked body … great imagery.

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  2. moondustwriter

    13/06/2014 at 2:15 am

    Oh I love the “summer lullaby” especially for mothers with young ones; dawn comes with a large yawn

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  3. Cheryl-Lynn

    13/06/2014 at 5:57 am

    I can so relate to this…dawn is often my lullaby being a night owl.

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    • Sky Vani

      13/06/2014 at 7:42 am

      In my 1st version, the last line was “bedtime, already?” 🙂

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      • Cheryl-Lynn

        13/06/2014 at 7:45 am

        Haha!! I usually hurry up to bed before the birds start chirping too much.

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      • Sky Vani

        13/06/2014 at 7:49 am

        Sounds familiar 🙂

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  4. magicalmysticalteacher

    13/06/2014 at 1:26 pm

    “the first rays of tomorrow”—exquisite!

    Summoning Daybreak

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  5. readinpleasure

    13/06/2014 at 1:32 pm

    Lovely!

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