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Wind (Tan Renga)

21 Jun

clinging to the bank
where water wrestles with rock –
one yellow leaf Jen of Blog It or Lose It)

trees bending branches lower
listening whisper of grass

For Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #40, “One Yellow Leaf” by Jen of Blog It or Lose It

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3 responses to “Wind (Tan Renga)

  1. Blog It Or Lose It

    21/06/2014 at 2:02 am

    I like how you’ve added the sound of the whispering grass, and the motions of the trees coming nearer – liking adding a frame to the whole picture. It’s beautiful. 🙂

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  2. Bastet

    21/06/2014 at 8:30 am

    a perfect continuation to this lovely haiku!

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  3. purplepeninportland

    24/06/2014 at 3:38 am

    I love the sounds in this haiku. Beautiful!

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