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Expectancy

02 Jul

The task for today is haiku by Chiyo-Ni:

koborete wa tada no mizunari  beni no tsuyu

the dew of the rouge-flower,
when it is spilled
is simply water

© Chiyo-Ni

I’ll try to answer in the following way:

creaking
sleep interrupted
just the wind

For Carpe Diem #504, Chiyo-Ni (1) ”the dew of the rouge-flower”

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2 responses to “Expectancy

  1. magicalmysticalteacher

    03/07/2014 at 9:14 pm

    Isn’t it amazing what he hear even when we’re sleeping?

    Chiyo-Ni’s Prompt

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  2. Bryan Ens

    03/07/2014 at 10:05 pm

    very cool…the prompt caused me to use wind as well…although in a rather different way. Nice that those creaks and groans are only the wind…

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