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Simple

07 Jul

Days In The Blackberries Field

between Moon and me
insurmountable mountain
I know the way back

For Carpe Diem #509 Chiyo-Ni (2) ”in an unknown sky”

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8 responses to “Simple

  1. arushiahuja

    07/07/2014 at 6:42 pm

    this leaves me pondering for if you navigate with moon you loose the way yet at night moonlight is the only way to know where to step… beautiful!!

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  2. Melanie Bishop

    07/07/2014 at 6:43 pm

    Lovely. So simple and and sweet.

    Melanie
    bd

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  3. moondustwriter

    07/07/2014 at 7:49 pm

    it’s good to know the way back. Easy to get lost in the unknown sky 🙂

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  4. artmusedog

    08/07/2014 at 12:30 am

    wonderful and contemplative haiku ~ thanks, ^_^

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  5. Cheryl-Lynn

    08/07/2014 at 7:01 am

    The words of a strong person…and a night person too!

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  6. Mark M. Redfearn

    08/07/2014 at 10:14 pm

    Oh, how clever: The speaker knows the way back, even when the moon refuses to cooperate. I like what’s going on here!

    Moon in My Wineglass

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  7. Bastet

    09/07/2014 at 8:37 am

    Ah inconstant moon … but the mountain never moves! Lovely haiku!

    http://bastetswakalibrary.blogspot.it/2014/07/chiyo-ni-in-unknown-sky-july-8-2014.html

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  8. siggiofmaine

    10/07/2014 at 7:22 pm

    I love the last line ☺
    Peace
    Siggi

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