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In The Blackberries Field

18 Jul

Days In The Blackberries Field

in Blackberries Field
strong winds blow and hard rain falls
there’s no place like home

measuredly sun
just as the crops need
rich year

it’s still hard to leave
the Land of Blackberries Field
as long as spring breaths

And now, my very first haiku and one of the first steps into the Blackberries Field:

haiku 01 try sky

For Carpe Diem #518 Basho (4), ”has spring come”

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3 responses to “In The Blackberries Field

  1. Chèvrefeuille

    19/07/2014 at 12:06 am

    What a beautiful post Sky … your first haiku ever is just an all time masterpiece.

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  2. Gunn's Cabin Fever

    19/07/2014 at 2:03 am

    Yes, beautiful post – the first haiku has a really strong mood.

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  3. Bastet

    19/07/2014 at 9:39 am

    Excellent … bravo on your first haiku/haiga …

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