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Breaking The Circles

13 Aug

Days In The Blackberries Field

MOMENTARILY
untiring cricket
fighting with the sound of wheels
voice of sanity

CONTINUOUSLY
voice of sanity
fighting with the sound of wheels
untiring cricket

For Carpe Diem Sparkling Stars #1, “Frogpond”

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11 responses to “Breaking The Circles

  1. Chèvrefeuille

    13/08/2014 at 11:39 pm

    Well written Sky … an extraordinary take on the famous haiku by Basho …

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    • Sky V

      13/08/2014 at 11:57 pm

      Thank you, Kristjaan. I just penned the moment of writing. 🙂

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      • Chèvrefeuille

        14/08/2014 at 12:09 am

        And that is the most wonderful moment … caught in a nice haiku. It’s really a joy to read your haiku … you have a beautiful style …

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      • Sky V

        14/08/2014 at 12:18 am

        Thank you so much, it really means a lot.

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    14/08/2014 at 8:06 pm

    I think what I really like most with this.. is how different the meaning come out when you change the lines…

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  3. Cheryl-Lynn

    15/08/2014 at 4:14 am

    Very clever!! enjoyed both:)

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  4. milan rajkumar

    16/08/2014 at 7:53 pm

    amazing !

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