Failure, gossip, dream and awakening

19 Aug

oh, poor sunflower
bent by the rainstorm
reflects in puddles
‘sea shore whispers’,
shells gossip,
‘making love with sea’
in a dream garden
underneath the waterfall
golden stones
with every sunrise
awakened peony
greets the shadow

For Carpe Diem Full Circle #2, Puddles



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7 responses to “Failure, gossip, dream and awakening

  1. Chèvrefeuille

    22/08/2014 at 2:17 pm

    Wow Sky this is a really nice “full circle” response … all four haiku are beauties.


    • Sky V

      22/08/2014 at 2:48 pm

      Thank you. Interesting task, but wasn’t easy. Especially 2nd and 4th gave me a headache 😀


      • Chèvrefeuille

        22/08/2014 at 8:59 pm

        Well you did great … I am proud …


      • Sky V

        23/08/2014 at 9:14 am

        You should be proud on all of your students, you are a good teacher. 🙂 I know from experience because I am a teacher by myself. Whatever you do with love and passion is recognized and valued.


      • Chèvrefeuille

        23/08/2014 at 5:31 pm

        Thank you Sky … what a compliment you’ve given me here. Make’s


      • Chèvrefeuille

        23/08/2014 at 5:32 pm

        That was a wrong button 🙂 I would say … you make me blush …


      • Sky V

        23/08/2014 at 5:40 pm

        🙂 🙂 That is the truth, so without blushing! 🙂



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