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Fading

03 Sep

rhythm of drumming rain
smudged letters on a torn paper
beside the trash bin

Inspired by Carpe Diem #552, Decay

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9 responses to “Fading

  1. Tracesofthesoul

    03/09/2014 at 2:39 am

    I wonder what that “torn letter” was about…your words makes me thing. Nicely penned 🙂

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    • Sky V

      03/09/2014 at 2:42 am

      hmm… a page from a diary? a letter? a phone number? address? who knows… 🙂 thank you so much

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      • Tracesofthesoul

        03/09/2014 at 2:44 am

        Yes, a letter…of rejection, abandonment, relationship decayed….(sigh)

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      • Sky V

        03/09/2014 at 2:57 am

        Or maybe a love letter… left without reply… another rejection…

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      • Tracesofthesoul

        03/09/2014 at 3:12 am

        OH!! an affair!! a married woman …oh my!! this is delicious!

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  2. Chèvrefeuille

    03/09/2014 at 7:50 am

    Sounds like a romance that didn’t work … loveletters written torn apart and fading in the rain the words of deep love. Very strong haiku Sky. Love to use it for one of our Tan Renga Challenges if you don’t mind?

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    • Sky V

      03/09/2014 at 11:53 pm

      You really don’t have to ask. 🙂
      Thank you.

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  3. janicead

    04/09/2014 at 2:43 am

    Wonderfully crafted.

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