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Locked

07 Sep

Days In The Blackberries Field

a dusty basement
cemetery of worn toys
locked by the cobweb

For Carpe Diem #555, Cemetery

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9 responses to “Locked

  1. janicead

    07/09/2014 at 1:46 am

    Yes, there is more than one kind of cemetery.

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  2. magicalmysticalteacher

    07/09/2014 at 2:14 am

    I really like the unexpected direction you took! Delightful!

    Next to Your Tombstone

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  3. Belinda Broughton

    07/09/2014 at 3:03 am

    I once rented a place where the owners had stored the belongings of their little girl who dies. it was so sad, the toys and little clothes decaying to dust

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  4. Blog It Or Lose It

    07/09/2014 at 4:02 am

    A very different direction — very refreshing! And there’s still a lingering sadness too … well done.

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  5. Bastet

    07/09/2014 at 6:29 am

    My kind of cemetery! Loved the feel of this haiku though there is the melancholy as Jen mentioned .. one gets more a feeling of moving on … as in growing.

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  6. Tracesofthesoul

    07/09/2014 at 8:48 am

    Very clever and it is a cemetery isn’t it? like the empty nest.

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    07/09/2014 at 5:24 pm

    growing up.. yes for sure there are those places.

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  8. Jyotsna Bhatia

    07/09/2014 at 8:05 pm

    Liked the way you used the prompt in a different way 🙂

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  9. Chèvrefeuille

    11/09/2014 at 9:32 pm

    This is an unique take on cemetery Sky … loved it …

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