Winter Feeling

09 Nov

The King of Ice sailed away on the last boulder. I was watching while he was going away, but I didn’t wave for too long. Lot of work waited for me. I knew that the spring was near, so I should clean the basement and attic.

under the eaves
sparkling icicles
preserve space for swallows


Ledeni Kralj je otplovio na poslednjoj gromadi. Gledala sam dok je odlazio, ali nisam predugo mahala. Čekalo me je previše posla. Znala sam da je proleće blizu i da je trebalo očistiti podrum i tavan.

ispod strehe
svetlucave ledenice
čuvaju mesto lastama

Linked to Carpe Diem Kamishibai Extreme, #1 Winter feeling


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6 responses to “Winter Feeling

  1. J

    10/11/2014 at 1:02 am

    Oh, very neat — the King of Ice!
    Several ways to interpret this — and all of them quite appealing. Nicely done.


  2. Hamish 'Managua' Gunn

    10/11/2014 at 8:32 am

    Man you should take less drugs! But your message is very clear and so nicely said.


  3. Bastet

    10/11/2014 at 4:40 pm

    love it … reminds me of a fairy story.


  4. janicead

    11/11/2014 at 12:05 am



  5. Chèvrefeuille

    11/11/2014 at 5:31 am

    Awesome …. I thought this would be a big challenge for the family-members of CDHK, but as I see and read how much response you all have given … than I don’t know if I have chosen the name “Kamishibai Extreme” correct …. nice haibun Sky!


  6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    11/11/2014 at 7:02 pm

    Oh I love this .. there is a certain “cuteness” that is adorable.



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