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Falling

18 Jun

dried stains
smell of damp
decrepit walls

Linked to On The Trail With Basho Encore 5 a falling sound

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2 responses to “Falling

  1. From my Forest (@hamish_gunn)

    19/06/2015 at 2:05 am

    Very strong imagery

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  2. Chèvrefeuille

    22/06/2015 at 9:45 am

    Awesome …. a haiku in which karumi (lightness) is present. Karumi is a haiku writing technique invented by Basho

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