09 Jul

deserted shores
scattered along the river
listen to the whisper

water clears everything
except oblivion

Linked to Heeding Haiku With HA: Water


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2 responses to “Clear

  1. julespaige

    09/07/2015 at 5:41 pm

    At first I read deserted shoes… (pardon me, my grandchildren just left after a busy playful morning) –

    I am thinking now of the many ways to use desert, as in those vast spaces without rain.
    The dry ground cracked and dried up river beds. Not much there. Ghost towns of nature.

    Thanks for stopping by my post on the prompt. ~ Jules

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  2. mj6969

    10/07/2015 at 9:44 am

    There is a potency to these simple words – carefully chosen and well placed – with the last line – speaking volumes. Great response!



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