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Persistence

13 Jul

year after year
awkwardly he tries
to reach the sky
worn shoes are full of stones
but every summer he spreads his arms

Linked to Carpe Diem Special #156 Adjei’s third “silvery curtain” – Fountain

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3 responses to “Persistence

  1. magicalmysticalteacher

    14/07/2015 at 12:29 pm

    Shoes full of stones make the way painful!

    Silvery Curtain

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  2. Forest Tinker (@hamish_gunn)

    14/07/2015 at 3:24 pm

    Really good as a tanka – i wish i uderstood more about tanka, i certainly can’t write them…

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  3. milan rajkumar

    16/07/2015 at 4:32 am

    o so wonderful . the persistency is strong ! love every word .

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