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01 Nov

love poems for you
left on the colorful leaves
rot away slowly

shadow behind your curtain
merges with the nothingness

Linked to Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #1 Teika’s first of Ten Tanka Writing Techniques “Mystery and Depth”

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5 responses to “13110

  1. Anonymous

    01/11/2016 at 3:05 am

    That looks very bitter…!

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  2. milan rajkumar

    01/11/2016 at 5:49 pm

    perfect portraying of a melancholic memory !

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  3. janicead

    02/11/2016 at 6:07 am

    Oh, the shadows on the curtains……

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  4. Chèvrefeuille

    04/11/2016 at 11:30 am

    Beautiful tanka Sky in which you have used the mystery and depth in a nice way.

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