04 Nov

resisting the wind
armed with a single leaf
a bare branch
why did you stray into the dream
a long forgotten Moon?

Linked to Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #4 Teika’s 2nd Tanka Writing Technique “Appropriate statement” – prompt: bare branches


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5 responses to “10311

  1. Baigneur de Fôret

    04/11/2016 at 2:23 am

    Very good indeef


  2. thotpurge

    04/11/2016 at 2:38 am

    Like this!!


  3. janicead

    04/11/2016 at 4:59 am

    The twist at the end is a great completion… Leaves one wondering about the forgotten moon.


  4. Virginia Popescu

    04/11/2016 at 8:21 am

    So poetically said ! I like the music of this tanka !


  5. milan rajkumar

    04/11/2016 at 6:29 pm

    lovely ! reminds me of ‘the last leaf ‘ of O Henry !



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