slipping slowly through
the slightly opened windows
a smell of autumn
summers in rearview mirror
departing to be back once

Linked to Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #7 Teika’s third Tanka Writing Technique “Elegant beauty”


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    1. Yes, I know. I was trying to find a word with that meaning to fit into the form 57577 but I gave up at the end because it’s too late. This one needs correction. Thanks for the suggestion.


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