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11212

12 Dec

a lonely leaf
torn away in December night
aimlessly wanders

Linked to Carpe Diem #1094 Trio for Violin, Cello and Piano Op. 17 Allegro Moderato by Clara Schumann

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3 responses to “11212

  1. Baigneur de Fôret

    12/12/2016 at 11:29 pm

    Solitary maybe, but a lonely leaf…..not sure leaves get lonely. Saying it is is telling the reader instead of showing. Apart from that nice haiku..

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    • Sky D Sky

      13/12/2016 at 12:05 am

      I know, you’re right. I wanted to write only “a leaf” but it was too short when I read it. Another version was “a single leaf” but I put “lonely” and don’t know why 🙂

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      • Baigneur de Fôret

        13/12/2016 at 7:22 am

        I think a single leaf is very nice and possibly stronger than lonely. In fact more I think about it the more powerful it is. Interesting.

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