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22802

28 Feb

In my dreams everything seem so real. So do you. Sometimes I’m not quite sure if something really happened or it was just a figment of my imagination. Some dreams are so beautiful that I desperately, nights and nights after, try to re-create the atmosphere and dive into them again. I rarely succeed. But they leave a deep mark. Sometimes indelible.

bud of rose
spreads its’ petals
to the sun
bathed in a morning dew
shyly for the first time

Linked to Carpe Diem #1165 roses

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15 responses to “22802

  1. Baigneur de Fôret

    01/03/2017 at 1:21 am

    A beautiful sensuality to this piece. Vivid and lovely description. So nice.

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  2. thotpurge

    01/03/2017 at 1:54 am

    Love that shy rosebud! Nice image…

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  3. *blogfia*

    01/03/2017 at 2:35 am

    Great sensuality and strong – beautiful tanka!

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  4. janicead

    01/03/2017 at 2:59 am

    splendid!

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  5. Virginia Popescu

    01/03/2017 at 6:58 am

    A beautiful text an tanka ! I love that bud of rose “bathed in a morning dew”.

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  6. kim881

    01/03/2017 at 8:21 am

    Ah, a shy rose – but not for long!

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  7. TRANSLITERRA

    01/03/2017 at 2:08 pm

    Beautiful !

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  8. Suzanne

    02/03/2017 at 5:35 am

    A very seductive poem.

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