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09 Jul

silver moonlight
checking tasks off
to-learn list

Linked to Carpe Diem #1216 moonlight

sudden meeting
face in the mirror
without empathy
 
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6 responses to “20907

  1. Candy

    10/07/2017 at 12:25 pm

    your last line took me by surprise – love the idea of a to learn list! This little gem gives me much to ponder. 🙂

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  2. Charley

    10/07/2017 at 3:48 pm

    On the “no rules” haiku… “no empathy.” That is well-packed!

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    • Mish D Sleeper aka Sky

      10/07/2017 at 11:01 pm

      Hi Charlie! I spent more time on that one than I usually do and still have a feeling that it needs to be a reconstructed a bit. So, thank you a lot for your feedback. 🙂

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      • Charley

        11/07/2017 at 12:29 am

        You are welcome!

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  3. Gillena Cox

    14/07/2017 at 1:10 am

    Both nice haiku, but I really like the juxtaposition in the first one, and its element of surprise

    much love…

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