silver moonlight
checking tasks off
to-learn list
Linked to Carpe Diem #1216 moonlight
sudden meeting
face in the mirror
without empathy
face in the mirror
without empathy
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Candy
10/07/2017 at 12:25 pm
your last line took me by surprise – love the idea of a to learn list! This little gem gives me much to ponder. 🙂
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Mish D Sleeper aka Sky
10/07/2017 at 10:58 pm
I’m glad if it’s so and thank you, Candy 🙂
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Charley
10/07/2017 at 3:48 pm
On the “no rules” haiku… “no empathy.” That is well-packed!
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Mish D Sleeper aka Sky
10/07/2017 at 11:01 pm
Hi Charlie! I spent more time on that one than I usually do and still have a feeling that it needs to be a reconstructed a bit. So, thank you a lot for your feedback. 🙂
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Charley
11/07/2017 at 12:29 am
You are welcome!
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Gillena Cox
14/07/2017 at 1:10 am
Both nice haiku, but I really like the juxtaposition in the first one, and its element of surprise
much love…
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