22107 – Cherita 5

22 Jul

night on a beach

two bodyprints
in the wet sand

and the seaweed
between his fingers
trapped in a dream


exploring the night
tangled in the seaweed
salty fingers

Linked to Carpe Diem #1222 Beach


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5 responses to “22107 – Cherita 5

  1. janicead

    23/07/2017 at 5:18 am

    Salty dreams!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. readinpleasure

    24/07/2017 at 5:38 pm

    Beautifully done 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Chèvrefeuille

    24/07/2017 at 5:52 pm

    I love this poetry form, cherita, what is the origine of it?

    Liked by 1 person

    • Mish D Sleeper / Sky D Sky

      24/07/2017 at 8:14 pm

      Cherita is the Malay word for story or tale. A cherita consists of a single stanza of a one-line verse, followed by a two-line verse, and then finishing with a three-line verse. It can be written solo or with up to three partners.
      I copied this from this page



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